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Recently, there is a problem that cause a heated discussion about the importance of a name. Some people hold the view that the name is not important at all while others hold oppsite view. From my perspective, i totally agree that name is significant. First of all, name is a symbolic for a person. It Is a gift which is given by our parents. As the result of it, we should more precious it rather than change our name causully and think it not important.The reason why our parent will give the name to us is that we are family.If we are not family, why they give name to us.They have no right to do that also not care about it.What more, people show their respect to you when people call your name. In other way,that is to say,people think you are not important to them so they call you by another way. So repect others and ourselves, treasuring our name.