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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1771
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题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

Recently, there is a problem that cause a heated discussion about the importance of a name. Some people hold the view that the name is not important at all while others hold oppsite view. From my perspective, i totally agree that name is significant. First of all, name is a symbolic for a person. It Is a gift which is given by our parents. As the result of it, we should more precious it rather than change our name causully and think it not important.The reason why our parent will give the name to us is that we are family.If we are not family, why they give name to us.They have no right to do that also not care about it.What more, people show their respect to you when people call your name. In other way,that is to say,people think you are not important to them so they call you by another way. So repect others and ourselves, treasuring our name.

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