2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Nowadays,we can see many succeeded persons.We see them with red eyes,but we don't know they who are hard .If you want to be succeeded,you will be a strong will. When we do things with have a strong will,we can be more 80% succeed.Because of have a strong will,you will have energy to do it.With a strong will,you can do things with passion. As far as I'm concerned,so students do.If you don't study hard,you will a nothing and not a knowledge people to social.