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As far as I am concerned ,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.Most of people will understand that it is a stupid behaviour when hearing this,but when they deal with the affaiirs in their life,they always make mistakes like this. As most of parents thinking,the examination to university ,even the examination to high school are very important,for that in their opinions,you go to the good high school,it will increase the opportunity to go to good university.If you graduate from a good university,you can find a good job and have a good life.However,not everyone can go to good high school and university.Many people fail the exam and go to higher vocational school to study.From my angle,if you work hard,you can have a good job in the future.We don't need to give all my desire to examination.It just deside where we go but not decide how we can live,life depend on us after all. To sum up,we don't need to have the faith that we must go to the university,we just need to work hard.In fact,gold is gold,everywhere.
