江苏省苏州市高新区2011届九年级上学期期末调研测试作文：父母有没有必要陪读

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Dear editor, I'm writing to discuss about whether our parents should accompany us studying. We do have different opinions on this matter. Most people think that we shouldn't rely on our parents. If we need parents' help to do everything. We won't grow old. It is bad for our studying habits. It has a bad effect on our self-control. Besides, it maybe influences our parents' work and rest. Others agree with the matter. They think parents should accompany us studying. Their idea is that we can set up our learning arms with parents' help and our parents can also urge us to finish our homework. our parents will encourage us to solve the problems. In my opinion, we should learn to be independent. As long as we are interested in learning,we can improve our grade. We should try our best to do what we can do.