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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦165:说出你的烦恼

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:08浏览次数:1927
要求:
最近学校进行了“说出你的烦恼”的调查,请你用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.50%学生认为作业多、压力大;
2.30%的学生认为父母要求严、相互沟通少;
3.20%的学生认为活动少、体质差;
4.说说解决的方法和措施。
要求:
1.句子通顺,表达准确,可适当增加细节使内容连贯;

2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右


Our school has made a survey -----“Don’t keep your worries ”.Here are the results.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Our school has made a survey--"Don't keep your worries"Here are the results. Nowadays, almost half of students say that they have too much homework. Those homework makes them very stressful. 30% of students think that their parents are too strict with them and their parents. Others hold the view that school should offer more activities to enhance their health. In my opinion, students can improve their thoughts with parents and schools. They should carefully finish their homework and do them on time.

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