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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36954
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分59.0分
评语:

作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;结构较为严谨,文中衔接成分很少。

用户练习作文:

May is my best friend, she lives in Shenzhen city, GuangDong province. She is fifteen years old. She works in Shenzhen at present. She is kindly person who is can help me solve some troubles to me. When i was unhappy, i would call her and talked with her. She likes pink colour, most of her shoes and clothes are pink colour. We are live in different city, most of time we are chatting with mobile phone. I want to see her in this summer holiday.

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