2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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When my foreign friend arrive in China , I will take her to see the Tian An Men square because of the long history . It is a honor for me to show the interesting place Tian An Men square that many factors involve . However , Beijing is a beautiful city conclude tall buildings and the morden life . So in the beginning , Tian An Men square is a indication of history and morden ,