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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些

用户练习作文:

As far as I am concerned,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.My reasons are as follows. Firstly,our appearance is not decided by ourselves,it is decided by our parents.When we borned,we can't decide how can we look like,that means we can't decide which kind of people we want to be.Secondly,what kind of person we want to be is decided by ourselves,there is not a saying like that'if you are ugly,you must be a bad people'.It is a very unreasonable and immature way to judge people.Thirdly,the personalities of people are so complicated that you can't guess them only by appreance.There are mant examples that beautiful people hurted someone,everyone is equal.It is a stupid way to choose which kind of people to communicate with or get along with only by looking at them appearance. We should understand them by communicating or get along with them,from my angle,it is a good and useful way to understand people.

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