句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;文中衔接词丰富;作者词汇量偏小,且文章中拼写错误较多。
I have a good friend whose name is william ,he is five years old he is a boy and he is very loverly . we oftern play games together such as basket ball, chess, football. etc. he is good at studing too, he oftten get good scores furing the examand our teacher says he set a good examaple to us,