Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,
With the development of the technology, the computers become so common that nearly all people can touch the Internet world. From this picture, we can see that even though the son and his parents are in a house, his parents can't see him easily for the son is addicted to the computer, so what can parents do is text message to their son to convey their hope. People communicating through the Internet is a new and fashionable way, but on the long term, it will produce the sense of distance among people, even your families. When you face them, you don't know what to say, you become silent and indifferent. At that time, you would rather choose to chat with them on Internet than face to face. But it is a way that is lack of warmth, emotion and feel. No matter how the world changes, electronic communication never replace face-to-face contact. Computers are not the best material that will build the bridge to promote people's relationship, on the contrary, the conventional contact is like a string, connecting one person's heart to anothers'.