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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9557
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
要求
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
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With the development of the Internet technology, Internet is becoming more and more important in people's life. Especially shopping on the Internet, online shopping has become a fashion style. There is no doubt that shopping online is more convenient than shopping outdoors. People don't spend to waste too much time on shopping, just a little time and a smartphone, we can get whatever we want, and things will be sent to our hands. Besides, we can buy everything in the internet. Online shopping allows us to get whatever we want anywhere in the world more quickly. Most importantly, it gives people more choices when buying things. However, shopping online is virtual anyway, we can't see things in naked eye. the qualities of the things are not guaranteed. Another question is that people have to wait for a time to get the things, and the time is not fixed. Though shopping online is convenient, not everything is suitable to buy online. People should be selective about things' buying style. Before buying something, we should know about it in the stores, and then decide the method.

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