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作者词汇基本功很好，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Do what you love and insist it Sometimes,we are always stay in a state of chaos and unhappiness,feeling that nothing is worth doing,and continue an featureless life without any goals,boring and tired.In fact,we can change such situation if we find something we love and insist it. I still remember that fantastic song accidently heard by me in a small store sells beverage three years ago.That day i was very depressed and felt nothing i could do to change my feeling.Staying in high school for one year,i couldn't find any advantages of mine but various faults.I wandered alone in the lightless long street seemed as a infinite black sky without any stars as if i were abandoned by someone. Suddently,a mild and hearty song flied into my ears from a small store, and struck my strongly heart.A warm stream of tears dropped down from my eyes out of some strange reason i didn't know.In that moment i fell in love with that song.Not soon i gradually fell in love singing and took part in many singing matches.Since that,i have been in state of happiness. As a matter of fact,the meaning of life is finding something you love to make yourself happy in your whole life.
