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I still remember that our teacher asked me a question,if there are two kinds of life,one is regular and make a lot of money,the other is free but make less money,which kind of life will you choose?At that time,I choose the second one. As far as I am concerned,life is not so long that you can waste time on the meaningless things.We ought to choose what we want to do and then do it immediately and firmly.I like the life that is full of challenge.My parents said I like this kind of life now just because I am not mature enough,even though I like this way of life truely,I will change my thought and change for a more stable life in the future for that I need to look after my children.However,I don't think it is contradictory,who says that we can't live the life we like? To sum up,from my angle,we should work harder to make our dream come true and like the life we live.
