2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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As an new generation I have witnessed the fast growing technologies influced every espect of people's daily life, we talk and email to each other everyday which were darelly imaged 100 years ago. Technology start to infect every espect of our life, therefore some people complains to some extend technology makes our life complex. so what should we do? Do we need to abandon these equipments? Admittedly, technology plays an important role in our dairly life, especially for those people who were born and influced by morden technologies. Nowdays ,it's easy to spot young guies stroll around the road and palying with their smartphones. Using our smartphones we could Twit or Instragam, Viewing what's happening about our friends and realitives. Internet is not just a platform which provide us information, It has been already becoming a social mediam. Email Vedio Meeting and File sharing those exist every corner of our life ,making our private life and working much more convience than before. what's more, with the maturing AI tech. that unmaned vechicle and intelgence robot were no longer a dream for human being, I belive in the near future, those super-advenced invovation could change our life. But still, to some extend alone with the morden technology, there appears some disadvantages. for instance, the moden machineries are mutil-functioned which means they could fulful lot tasks than before, therefore it might be more complex and need more technical skill to operate it. people need to grap more knowledege than before. Another promblem is that since the advent of social media, many argued people were loosing their communaction skills, people were paying more attention on their phone in the virtual word and ingoring friendship in really word. some experts criticized social media were making the communication complex, people were loosing their capicity of making frieds. In conclusion, I have to despite there are some disadvantages alone with the morden technology, but I believe with the development of our social, experts could find a good way to sove these problem.