字数:200满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
As is exhibited in the picture above, a Chinese-styled hot-pot is sizzling with blocks which are decorated with characters describing things distinctive to Chinese cultural. And a line of worlds hanging on the bottom, says ‘yummy and nutrient hot-pot made from blending culture’. Obviously enough, the illustration is to bring out the superiority of cultural integration. Owing to the broad applicable scope of the world ‘culture’, fusion of various types of culture can involve every aspect of our life. Firstly, for individuals, in every thing that we eat, wear, and live we can find traces of modern science and technology, which is usually regarded as the symbol of western word. For example, even an apple you get from your grandma, it may embodies western technology such as farm management, transportation, cold storage technology and so on. Secondly, for companies or other collectives, it’s always beneficial to have joint effort, not only because it can bring activity into each other, but also for the chance to acquire advanced ideas , effective methods and precious experience mutually. Moreover, when it comes to the whole country or society, we can find it especially rewarding to open up to the world. Since reform and opening up, our generation have witnessed the great achievement our country has made. As a result, our country is stronger, and our people feel more secure and happier. In my personal opinion, just like every coin has two sides, opening up can also be dangerous when we are not strong enough. Only by striving to promote traditional Chinese culture can we seek joint development and make even greater contribution to the world.