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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者词汇基本功很好，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用可适当增加几条从句；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Internet can't replace face-to-face contact Wherever we are, we will find somebody is lowing his head, seeing his smartphone. It is prevalent to see such phenomenons nowadays.But through that kind of electronic communication, we may not feel others' heart and feelings enough. Around 1 month ago, out of some reasons, i couldn't attend my uncle Tan's birthday party, so i used my phones to send him messages to bless him. I quickly send several messages to him and expected his reply,nervous and excited. However, he didn't answer me until evening. What he said is just only a word" Thank you!", which made me confused whether he was happy or not. Then, i sent him some messages again, and he also answer me swiftly,saying that he was glad to receive my bless and wished everything good to me. I still remembered we always would talked a lot about his birthday face-to-face, but now it has changed a lot.Though the same is the meaning of his words, i couldn't feel his heart and feelings. Silence may exist between you and your friends or families when we communicate by electronic products rather than face-to-face talking. Therefore, internet can't replace face-to-face contact.
