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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;适当增加高级词汇的使用,拼写错误稍微有点多。

用户练习作文:

I don't agree the statement that snap judgements can never be trusted. The reasons are follewing: firstly, in many times we don't have enough time and power to experiment so many things, and then in many times we don't have enough confidence the make sure every decision we did were right and trusted. For example, when I chosed the majors after the exam of entrance into university. I never had this experiments to do this, and I have to make a jument that I may have intresting to take care of the small animals so that I chosen the veterinery. Secondly, every thing has two sides. The judgments with most considerison may not have a best result. However, the judgements with made snaply will be able to have a suprising result. For instance, after I have chosen the major in the university, I have really found the career in the future. I love to do the things to save more animals and help their owners to be happier. So the snaps judgements can be trusted sometimes.

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