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作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
Success for different people has different means. I had been living in china for more than twenty years; people who around me always tell the traditional truth: “the man who has got married and settled down to a job is having a success life to him”. As a result, for me, the goals have to meet before consider myself successful in life are marrying with the one of I love, then having a child and doing the job I like. In Chinese traditional views, a man should marries with someone and has at the least one boy. For a long time till twenty centuries in China, every family love the son more than their daughter because have a son can saving their family pedigree for generation by generation. Right now, most of family in China change their mind to have a girl or a boy is equally, but still having some parents require their child to give birth to a boy. This is the one of reasons why I come the United States. When most people think a person must saving their family pedigree, people are hard to resist that social phenomenon. When people around someone telling and asking “have you marry” or “have you own a boyfriend or girlfriend” every day, you just want to run away. That made me think about before I am marring with someone and having a child, I am not success. When someone have a family, the someone is a male in china, congratulations, he must to have a stable job for pay the cost of living. Even right now, the most of fathers are breadwinners for pay all of bills. Why most or Chinese student choose to study the business and computer science? Do they really like it or interest it? No, they just need a diploma to found a job. That why most Chinese male work the job they never like because they need it. If I can work that I like, I am successful. In conclusion, success for me is keeping to improve myself till I can work to which I like. Then, found a girl I deep in love and save my family name. Finally, I have a success life.
