高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句数量不足；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强。

My hometown is in a small town of the LeiZhou,there is a fine scenery near the sea. In the part,there were many great deal of trees around by the town,the river was clear and you can see the fish is playing in the water. Our house was simple and crude but the peason were the happiest,man's is hard work and live is poor. Now,there are build many buildings and factory, lots of special kinds of car is driving in the street,the industry developmental and enviroonment deterioration,many trees are discease,fish are discovered.It is so urgent thing that to do the pollution treatment.