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句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,we can get the information from the Internet easily and quickly.We can know whatever we want to know from different websites,most of apps volunteer information,that leads to many good and ban impacts.My opinions are as follows. The information explosion time gives us a lot of convenience that we can learn about the information we need even though countries' affairs.We can know what happend timely.However,this makes people play mobile phones all the time wherever they go.More and more people would like to chat on the Internet even make friends on the Internet.There is a usual image that friends go to the party together but everyone plays mobile phone.It indicts that people is crazy about play mobile phone and are addicted to it.They are now relay on the Internet and can't leave it.The communication between people becomes less and less. As far as I am concernd,information explosion is good but people ought to control ourselves to involve to keep at a distance among friends.Sometimes we still need to communicat face to face.
