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I have a new teacher.She is very kind.Her name is Wangqiang.Shi has a big eyes.and a small mouth.She is very tall.She has curly hair.She is very tall and strong. She likes to play basketball. She like cats. She teaches math and English.She is very busy. We all like her very much.