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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19624
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

In the picture, we can see two men who are disabled run to the distance together with each of their only remaining leg. The four crutches which can support them were put away. Similarly, in the bottom of the drawing, we can see, is the topic which appropriately conveys the meaning of the painting, "with one leg of each of us, together, we would travel all over the world." What the painter wants to tell us is the importance of cooperation. If we imagine that they never cooperate with another one and just walk by themselves, then how slowly they might be will come to our mind at once. Fortunately, they choose to be one person. Though the process might be difficult, I am sure they would overcome it and do better. In conclusion, bad conditions are not what we want, but we can never avoid them all the time. So we should learn to cooperate, learn to be a member of a team, and then we would possess the power more than the simple addition of each one's. Then we will conquer any enemy.

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