字数:200满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。
In the picture, we can see two men who are disabled run to the distance together with each of their only remaining leg. The four crutches which can support them were put away. Similarly, in the bottom of the drawing, we can see, is the topic which appropriately conveys the meaning of the painting, "with one leg of each of us, together, we would travel all over the world." What the painter wants to tell us is the importance of cooperation. If we imagine that they never cooperate with another one and just walk by themselves, then how slowly they might be will come to our mind at once. Fortunately, they choose to be one person. Though the process might be difficult, I am sure they would overcome it and do better. In conclusion, bad conditions are not what we want, but we can never avoid them all the time. So we should learn to cooperate, learn to be a member of a team, and then we would possess the power more than the simple addition of each one's. Then we will conquer any enemy.