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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。
Nowadays,a large amount of people think that a life without any problems is the happinest.However,adults always tell me that happiness is you can hadle with the problems you face and get experience from it. From my angle,happiness is not the life without problems but the procedure you deal with the problem.You can enlarge your sight and enrich you knowledge that you experience.There is no possibility that everything is going smoothly in your liffe.So we should create chances to make ourselves delight.As far as I am concerned,we shouldimprove our ability that deal with affairs not only on study,but also on life. If we all follow the step,we can have a nice a life in the future.
