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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；可适当增加文中高级词汇的使用，注意文中个别拼写错误。
In my opinion, I think that it depends. For the one thing, we are not able to be economic-independent, so we should treasure the money we get from our parents; for another thing, we are on our best time, I guess that we can spend more money on things we are intrereatd in. With development of internet, we could go shopping on line anytime, and it is very common for students to look through those websites such as Alibaba, Amazon etc. More and more girls focus on their appearence, so they might buy a lot of cosmetics
