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2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:23浏览次数:1454
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Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What is your opinion?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?
You are to write in three parts:
In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

From my own perspective, I hold the view that phone call is not able to kill letter writing. Maybe phone call is convenient for people nowadays, but letter writing has its special charm for people. Phone call brings great convenience for business and individuals, we love to use cellphone to call our parents to release the homesick when we pursue our further study in a far place; we will call someone for help if there are some problems; and managers could communicate issues together with their superiors in the phone even they may not be in the same city. So we can see that our life is more colorful with the existence of phone, but it can not kill letter writings. Letter writing stands for a kind of romance. When we go traveling, we usually prefer to send postcards to our intimate friends or ourselves instead of calling someone. When we try to pursue someone, we might love to show our feeling through letters. Of course, the use of letter writing might be less with the appearance of telephone, but it will not be kill by telephone. In conclusion, phone call has great impact on our life, improves our life quality while letter writing also brings us pleasure and enjoyment. So phone call can not kill letter writings.

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