2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

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Control Our Money Tightly Nowdays,most of teenagers that studied in colleges,are having a large interest in money .They think that money can do all the things.Yes,money really can do many things,but not all.We need to use our money politely.Can you imagine a student using about 100 dollars a day but has no result and turns himself or herself worse and worse? One of my classmate,A, did just what I said,and perhaps he's doing now.A is very week in all subjects,like Geography,English,Maths,Chinese,Music and so on.He never got more than 80 marks in any examination.But,he mostly know everything about games and toys.That makes him has a feeling like he's a nobility.Some other classmates asked him why did he know such a lot things,and A said that he used about 500 dollars to make the experience in a 'fashion' game!After that I finally know why his marks are so low--he always paly games at home and see the homeworks as air!He's truely bad enough! There's another bad person in my class,that is my deskmate,B.He also know a lot about games,but his school work is in a complete mass.Because my work is good,so he often let me show him my homework--just for copy.Why?Because he has no time for doing homework and he doesn't know how to do--he hasn't listen to the lessons.And,for another reason,he has to spend money for games!He hadn't got more than 90 marks in any examination,too. That's the disavantage for spending money casually.Let's control our money tightly in our hand,keep away from the bad behaviours!