高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句数量不足；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇使用比较灵活。

My hometown My name is Chen Hao.I born in Wuhan city,Jiangxia district,Zhengdian subdistrict,there is my hometown. My hometown about 20000 populations,major economic income is agriculture.Many years ago,my hometown surrounded green tree ;the fish played in clear river;the house was siample,the street was narrow,people's life very poor.But now,the economy has developed,the tall buildings,factorys is built every where,kinds of car ran on the road,due to industry develop ,the environment turn worse and worse,the tree disappear,we need to treat the pollution in immediately.