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作者句法基础较为扎实；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；文中衔接词丰富。
Just like a coin which has two sides, pressure has its advantages and disadvantages. From my own perspective, being a student, I think that more academic pressure does good to us. Having gone through extremely tough time in high school, many students start to low down the self-discipline when they enter universities. As the proverb goes, self-discipline may control your life. Therefore we could see a lot of students looking through websites in the class, playing games in the dorm day and night even they might slip classes. There is nobody putting pressure on them, and they are not able to control themselves, moreover, the atmosphere around them encourages them to be lazy. So I assume that it is better to have more academic pressure. Besides, I think that the ability to be up against pressure is essential, and we should strengthen this capability to adjust ourselves to the brutal market. According to survey recently, more and more employees are anxious about their work, what’s worse, most of them suffer from depression and sub-health. If we could develop good attitude to balance the pressure, we may be ease to consider our work. All in all, I do believe that pressure can boost us to move on if we could consider it in a positive way and find the balance point.
