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【题目要求】
It's better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents，agree or disagree ?
【题目讲解】
学校学习的好处，是不是就是老师的功能?上过课的翻翻笔记吧亲爱的们~传道授业解惑，老师的优势专业训练，互动教学过程。然而家长教育，1.家庭环境更轻松，家长可能更耐心，2.家长可以言传身教对不对~但是!有缺陷吗?1.家长可能教育比较随性，没有方法，小孩子接受起来不一定好，效率不高。2.而且家长的知识有限对不?3.家里的设备也有限。不像学校多媒体呀，同学互相帮助呀，图书馆呀等等。
作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；作者词汇表达丰富灵活，高级词汇使用也较熟练，要注意避免个别拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Nowadays, more and more students attend to universities. The overall expenses are expensive. In order to figure out whether it's better to study in university than stay at home, we need tp take cost-benefit ratio into account. For most Chinese students, they often choose to live away from home. They enjoy their college' lifes. They can attend clubs, go to libraries, organise activities and so on. Universities will provide ample sources for their study, letting alone curriculums. Since curriculums are relatively more comprehensive than home education, we will not be puzzled when study is on the progress. On the other hand, we can konw students from all kinds of lives. Then you will have a broader mind. We can have an access to experts in our own territory. We can also communicate with professors about our future careers. Netherless, disadvantages also exist in universities. You may not get on well with your roommates. Lacking guidance, you may get lost and avoid your own responsibility. When you stay at home with parents. Obviously, it;s convenient. Nonetherless, you lack the interaction with outside world. Then you may feel uneasy when you start to work in the society. Provided that your parents don't have a good education, they cannot give you the best advice for your future. Considering all aspects, I agree that living away from home is better. However, students need to be independent.
