2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇使用比较灵活。

Nowadays,technical grows quickly than before,it also point out that humam being are able to do more things through the Internet.There are many kinds of facilities to use Internet and the first one is computer. There are both good and bad impacts between computer and man,and my statements are as follows.First,computer is a tool that people use to decrease the problems in the life such as buy things or calculate a large amount of figures.Computers can make a correct answer immediately without any delay and mistake.Howewer,man are more relay on computer and make computer do almost everything,that leads to many society problems such as we don't need many workers,in result,a great number of man can not find job,even the colleges. As far as I am concerned,we should use computer in a proper way,it is not appropriate to make computers to do anything.I would like to say that people is not weaker than computer for that computer is made by man in the end.