小学二年级英语作文:Our house

文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

This is my house,it is very big.It's a warm world. All family are live in it. Ha!This is my parents'room.It's big.My father is sit on the this chair.My mother is sleep on this bed. This is my room.It's big,too.It's name's "Ann park" because it's very lovely and interesting.This is my desk.Everyday I do homework here.This is my bed.It's pink because pink is my favourite color. This is our sitting room.It's tidy.It has a table,four chairs,a TV,a mat and a flower.We often sing songs here and watch TV here. This is our book room.It's big but small than the sitting room.It has many many wonderful books.This is bothroom, It so small.