小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

I have a new friend.his name is Zhang qiang. He is thin and tall.He is ten years old.he likes playing chess and eating.He is shy. And he is clever too. He work hard. His pet is a dog. He has a sister.a brother. He likes apples. He doesn't like bananas or pears. He can speak Chinese. We all like him very much.