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2015年高考作文优秀范文:中秋节

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:9528
要求:
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。

参考词汇:

中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
 

用户的作文(系统评分90.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒。

用户练习作文:

Over a lengthy period of time, disputes over the issue of the inclination of the government when they are launching a project to support specific fields never seem to terminate. Personally speaking, without a doubt, I'll be in favor of sponsoring the arts more. To begin with, there may be numerous reasons which can be classified into several categories, yet the one suspended at the top of the list, I would argue, is that the arts can directly change the way of people's life while the athletics can not. During weekends, countless people opt to go to the gallery to refresh themselves. For one thing, they can relax and meanwhile improve their aesthetic sense of making appreciation, if connoisseurs come to guide them. As a consequence, they can forget all their troubles when they go back to work, so they can work much more efficiently, and this is one demonstration to show the direct effect on people's way of life made by the arts. For another, if galleries charge some money for tickets, provided that it is not exaggeratedly expensive to reduce people's enthusiasm to get entrance, their earnings can be rather considerable, and such income can be donated to charities to improve the welfare system of the community in many aspects such as medicine, education and food security. And this is another reflection of the arts' direct influence. Furthermore, in contrast, honors made by the minority of the athletics can never alter people's way of life straightly. To illustrate this point, an exemplification coming to my mind is Sunyang, an well-famed Chinese swimmer who broke the world record, in 2012 London Olympics. Apparently, his achievements are unprecedented. Nevertheless, ironically, impacts along with his success are rather inconspicuous. Right after he got the championship, according to an investigation revealed by Shanghai Daily, nearly 70 percent of students involved in the survey say they would not increase their time in exercising because of the incentive Sunyang has brought us, to say nothing of becoming a sportsman. Therefore, it's not hard to find the fact that glories won by a few elites can only be a triumph to the nation, or to the government in a sense, but never the stimulus to encourage the sport to gain its popularity, not to mention transform people's life immediately. With all the evidences listed above, I assume, we can draw a conclusion that the government should spend more money supporting the arts rather than the athletics, as a result of the direct impact made by the arts on our life.

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