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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中高级词汇不足；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Yangjiang is my hometown which in Guangdong Province. I love my hometown very much because it is so beautiful and the people in Yangjiang is kind and enthusiasm. My hometown is a traval place, there has wonderful view such as the beautiful sea.I will take my foreign friend to sight the excellent ocean. On the beach he can lie on the chair as well enjoy the sunshine. In the sea he can surf with me or swimming with a good emotion. Of course, there also has a plenty of delicious food. For example, one food called "zhuchanglu".This food is special in local. I think my friend will like to eat. Everyone likes hometown,so do I. I am hopeful that my foreign friend can enjoyable.
