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I have a pet.It's a dog.It is Ma dan. It is ten years old.It is very cute.It is young.It has short legs.It has big eyes and long ears.It‘s very small.It has a short tail.It likes eating bone.It likes running.Sometimes It likes playing with a ball.I like my pet very much.