2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；高级词汇使用比较准确，文中词汇表达稍显贫乏；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

It's a normal phonomenon that a person make a conclusion by listening and seeing.However,making a great conclusion should consider the facts as many as you can. Generally speaking ,the things you saw and listened are the parts of the overall truth,as another parts hide under external facts.The conclusion you make straightly is not comprehensive.Furthermore,the things you saw or listened are not awlays the truth without errors,so judging the facticities of the things should get more importance to make a conclusion. Undountly,it is not advisable to make a conclusion directly without thinking and analysing.