增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. I am happy now.first, I have a wondorful sleep.Second, I can buy some my fevorite books.I like books very much.last,my fevorite sport is swim.So I think I can be a swimming instructor. Yours, David
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