英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6300
要求:

题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。

用户练习作文:

From my angle,it is very important to maintain trust between each other.If we didn't trust others,it will be more difficult to get along with others that we make friends with.There are many reasons to maintain trust,my reasons are as follows. First,everyone live in the world need friends,we need something to ask help for friends such as go to the examination,we need a partner to make a conversation;the group travelling,we need friends to arrange something that we don't good at with;to take beautiful photos,etc.From all above,we have to trust them so that they will become our friends ,and then we can ask them to give us a hand.However,it is hard to make friends without trusting the person that you ask for.We ought to communucate with each other and sacrifice some time to accompany them and develop a sense of trust. As fas as I am concerned,if we want to live happier and easier in our life,it is important and necessary to build trust between each other that we get along with everyday.And then,the world will be more excellent.

会员评论0个评论)
Lithromatic
金币:54

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:89.01907087860

人气:41发布:2013-06-07

得分:89.0北冥流觞

人气:58发布:2013-11-17

得分:89.0AmandaAi

人气:34发布:2014-04-10

得分:89.0tanyangyang

人气:10发布:2016-06-07

得分:88.0Kisara

人气:65发布:2013-06-20