错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My favourite sport Football is my favorite sport.One day on the way home ,I picked up a football,It's still new.I like it so much,then I play it with my friends,we are enjoy it.I most insterested in playing football,that's the change that I fell in love with the football. So we also make a football team.We are usually train and play together.Bekham from England is my favorite football star.To be a professional is my biggest wish,when I grow up I hope that it will be come true.