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新东方托福高分作文:你更想在大公司还是小公司工作?

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:34浏览次数:1088
要求:

【题目要求

Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

【题目分析

选择哪一个都无所谓,列出三个理由。不要忘了提及另外一种选择也有一些好处。也可以说不同的情况下可以做出不同的选择。
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当。

用户练习作文:

it is universally acknowledged that a large company can make much greater contribution to society and economy than a small company can do. When we work for a large company, there are more chances for us to improve our nation on our own,and even to change the world. In other words, we are more likely to be heroes. Besides, our relatives and friends will respect us. Our social status is also high. Additionally, the study environment in a large company is better than that in a small company. Because there are a lot of clever people who will teach us so much and have wonderful impact on us.

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