2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达贫乏，学术词汇还要加强，词汇拼写要认真；可以适当增加副词的使用。

as long as has high degree that is would more high earnings,it was more has high degree t would unemployment rate than lows.less than high school diploma unemployment rate average 7.6 percent ,high degree median weekly earnings average 5797. beacuse has knowlege able to impove person join into assign jobs at the sociats ,learn professional skills good for seeking into jobs，but professional degree more attraction than theory'doctoral degree good for needs in the sociats. as far as i'm concerned that degree advantage for seeking jobs ,earning will be high at the average salary.