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with the rapidly development of society, resulting in a large kind of problem in earth. there are people think that it is too late to solve these problem. however, there are contrasting views that various kind of measures can be carries by us to work out the problem. because of the fast pace of industrial, the soil and air, to some extent, exist different kinds of pollution. indeed, the government launched a series of policy to curb and improve the condition. for example, in major metropolitan cities, the traffic have totally improved because of the limitation to the cars' number so that most of the people have to choose public transportation, naming, bus and share-bicycle. it is reported that the air quality increase a lot comparing with before. nevertheless, in small town, before it was a small village for farming, since it became a foods industrial park, the soil have already replaced by the big construction for producing. as for this kind of problem, the government organized a row of volunteers to plant tress and flowers so as to balance the environment . to be frank , some of the problem can not be deal with after pollution. the water pollution has put into the top agenda. due to the water pollution is hard to improve in short time. by and large, human activities, to some degree, have side effect on the plants and animals species. furthermore, humanity try their best to minimize the side effects. with the society becoming more developed, the problems caused by industrialized can be solved one by one.
