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My hometown My hometown is situated in the middle of our city.In the past, it has beautiful scenery that is surrounded by green trees and the fishes were having fun in the lake, what's more, the house was simple and brute, person's woke-life were poor.But now, it has made great changes in my hometown.The high buildings are standing there densely and the big and large cars always appear on the street, even if the change brings many benefits, it also brings some troubles, such as the trees has reduced quickly and the fish has disappeared, it has no time to wait so we should take some methods to deal with the problem of pollution.