小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。

My father is very busy. Every day he goes to work by car. He teaches math at school, His math is very good! In the afternoon, he eats lunch at home. After that, he reads books. Then he goes home at half past six. He eats dinner. Then, he takes a bath in the evening. He watches TV at living room. After watching TV, he goes to bed at ten clock. My father works hard. I like my father very much!