小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中高级词汇不足；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

Lili is one of my best friend.She is twelve years old .She was born and Raised by her granny in Dahuang viliage Shizhen township Wannian county Jiangxi province. At the age of five,She was taken to Wenzhou city Zhejiang province to the effect that her parents can work hard for supporting her familly.She was a naughty and clever little girl,with a round face and two pure eyes.She was always smiling no matter some trouble came to her.Wow,I haven,t seen her for several years.A little miss her