2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

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Today,i witnessed a very sad issue.It became at 13:00 pm on April 4th.In front of a tall building,a car crashed a young woman. In that time,my friend and i were walked on the street,wo talked about the happy things with each other.Suddenly,we saw a red car crashed a young woman in front of us.Then,a little girl shuted at once.we also felt unbeliverable.After 10 minutes,some people ran to the spot instantly.About 30 minutes,some had hearted peoples broutht the young woman to hostipal. Now,my heart still feel uncomfortable.I think,we should be carefully when we cross the road.Don't feel that is a small thing.You could the next one as like as that young man.But i also suggest the drivers,please drive sfaety for your own.Because due to your regardless,you could make a people loss the life.