2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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This essay about the education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.these source is from the bureau of labor statistics ,current population survey.And the survey is that date are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers. in the picture we can see that the degrees are higher the weekly earnings are higher and the unemployment rate are lower. for example, if the people have the doctor degree ,in the survey , they can got about 1551 dollars in the weekly earnings and the unemployment rate just 2.5 % in 2011. on the other hand the one just less than high school diploma will get 451 dollars after a weekly hard work and the unemployment rate is 14.1%. and in the picture we can get the average date that the weekly earnings is 797 dollar and the unemployment rate is 7.6%. So we can know the significance about the degree in our life.