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The table contains information about the different ethnic groups making up the population of Atlantis City over two decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
从句数量偏少；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文章中拼写错误较多，同时请作者增加词汇丰富度；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
the table compares the change of the population of etnic groups in atlantis from 1988 to 2008. we can see in the table, all the four ethnic group's population increased from 19988 to 2008.the population of Caucasian increased the slowest, from 60,000 peole in 1988 to 72,000 people in 2008 and the pecentage to total population decreased from 68% to 47%.In constract, s.e asain's, indian's, polynesian' spopulation grew both in number and percentage, from 11,000(12%),2000(6%),16000(18%) to 3500(23%), 8500(6%), 37000(24%) respectively.the population of s.e asian grow the fastest.we also can see from the table that the caucasian also the majority group of atlantics city and the population of s.e. asian and polynesian became more and more close
