小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend is WangLi. She is a beautiful and kindness girl. And she is a 15 years old middle student. She has a pair of big eyes. She is used to reading English books in order to the better learn English, so she is good at speaking English. And she is used to playing the piano in afternoon so that she is good at playing the piano. Though she is versatile, she likes singing. We both don't play basketball. She is the most outgoing in my class. She likes listening to music, and she argue about music made people have lie down and good rest. Although she is work hard, my grade better than her. Although she is very introverted, she has more friends than me have. The teacher trusted her because she was honest. She is such a lovely girl that everyone likes her very much. Most of the teachers attach great importance to her because her composition is excellent. She has a lot of advantages, if she can be more outgoing. In the end, she is a helpful volunteer!