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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;全文结构较为严谨。

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When you hear something or see something,you have a big possibility to give a sight to your brain.Yes,most of people might be all this.However, it's always not the more people doing, the better things are.So it's a terrible thing that deciding things too early. And an example is that about jobs who had created the biggest electronic product company--Apple.He had been fired by Apple company ,yes as you have heard ,what fired him is exactly the company he created by himself. Maybe the most of people meet things like what he met, whoever will get loss,upset and hopeless.But we don't need be sad so quickly.Exactly,it's probably a terrible message for you,we also need find the good points under the thing.What Jobs did is creating a new company named NEXT.The company made a great economic income.And Apple bought this company and jobs got the power of Apple company once again. enha,sometimes things you see or you hear are not so easily as you think.After thinking a lot ,and then do your decision

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